Because self-flagellation seems to be the thing, I’m attempting a rondeau. I haven’t kept the strictest rhymes, but have used a fair amount of slant rhyme instead, just to keep it from clanging too much. Hopefully this isn’t the crappiest poem you’ve read all day.
{poof!}
Marie Gauthier 
2 responses to “NaPoWriMo Draft 22.”
Love the poem…..brings back memories of being awake in the tiny hours of the morning tending to baby needs. Can’t comment of the structure of your poem though, a “rondeau” – don’t know anything about that type of poem. I can say though, that it does not clang or jar, it flows nicely.
Thank you, Jacqui, how very kind of you to say! I’m so glad you enjoyed it.