Because self-flagellation seems to be the thing, I’m attempting a rondeau. I haven’t kept the strictest rhymes, but have used a fair amount of slant rhyme instead, just to keep it from clanging too much. Hopefully this isn’t the crappiest poem you’ve read all day.
{poof!}
Love the poem…..brings back memories of being awake in the tiny hours of the morning tending to baby needs. Can’t comment of the structure of your poem though, a “rondeau” – don’t know anything about that type of poem. I can say though, that it does not clang or jar, it flows nicely.
Thank you, Jacqui, how very kind of you to say! I’m so glad you enjoyed it.